SY - Athletic Director - Secondary

The provided job description is comprehensive and detailed, covering the responsibilities, qualifications, and requirements for the Athletic Director - Secondary position at Ramah High School. It uses HTML tags effectively for structure and clarity. However, it contains some redundancies, excessive detail, and formatting inconsistencies, such as repeated content and inconsistent use of tags, which could be streamlined for better readability and professionalism.

To improve, I will condense overlapping sections, organize the content more logically, and correct formatting issues while preserving all essential information. This will enhance clarity and engagement for potential applicants.